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venting - Tangled Web - 07-20-2012
The fire that burns deep in my soul
Is fueled by all the things that you did to me
It rages out of control
Giving me the energy to keep living this miserable existence
The tears that fall
Onto this burning inferno
Causes the smoke to rise burning my eyes causing even more tears to fall
It hurts to touch
The heat that hits my face scalds me even as the water pours out of my eyes
Like the bubbling water pouring out of tap
Enraged….. full of so much hatred
It hurts to breathe
It is suffocating
Being filled with so much evil, hatred, rage
You did this to me and I will hate you forever
THE END
RE: venting - mosaic - 07-20-2012
Wow what an evocative vent. Very powerful.
RE: venting - Reilly - 07-21-2012
(07-20-2012, 01:13 AM)Tangled Web Wrote: The fire that burns deep in my soul
Is fueled by all the things that you did to me
It rages out of control
Giving me the energy to keep living this miserable existence
The tears that fall
Onto this burning inferno
Causes the smoke to rise burning my eyes causing even more tears to fall
It hurts to touch
The heat that hits my face scalds me even as the water pours out of my eyes
Like the bubbling water pouring out of tap
Enraged….. full of so much hatred
It hurts to breathe
It is suffocating
Being filled with so much evil, hatred, rage
You did this to me and I will hate you forever
THE END
Well said Tangled Web!
RE: venting - sharon/treehouse family - 07-23-2012
Tangled Web,
That was powerful, Your an excellent writer...well done
RE: venting - Tangled Web - 07-24-2012
Thank you everyone for heariing me and replying. It means alot too me
Tangled
RE: venting - sharon/treehouse family - 07-25-2012
I feel expressing any emotion through any kind of writing is very therapeutic. Tangled, you did a wonderful job to express how you were feeling that as I was reading it it jumped out and I felt all of your different emotions and pain you were feeling at that moment. Do you write often because if you do don't stop, you have a gift of words.
hope to read more.take care
Kathleen
RE: venting - Tangled Web - 07-31-2012
thank you Kathleen. I used to write alot more than I do now. Occassionally something comes to me and if I am by my computer I can put it down. Haven't had a lot of time to write or been in the right head space for it, but I am glad you glad you liked it.
RE: venting - sharon/treehouse family - 08-01-2012
your very welcome Tangled Web
take care....
Kathleen