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a poem - clickclick4 - 03-13-2017
eyeliner sharp enough to carve out someones heart
and a light in your eyes that exposes me like a spotlight
you could get away with murder
or paint the sky in a night
limitless
you are limitless and dear lord i want you to succeed
your voice is utterly, painfully human
and you are not perfect
but you are good enough
then you lean in close to me and my head hits the mirror
RE: a poem - Blackrainbow - 03-13-2017
good poem
RE: a poem - Cammy - 05-24-2017
clickclick4: I love your poem. Do you have any more to share with us? I for one would love to read some more of your poetry.